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Hi I am looking for good friends!!
（トロント） 2017-02-17 13:28:38
Hi I am Korean 19Years old male.
I don't have any foreigner friends. Because I have a working holiday visa and I just worked a lot until now as well. So I don't have any chance for make friends.
I am not good English speaker but I hope to talk as English and exchange cultures each other. Drinking or Coffee shop!
I live in near finch station If you are interesting please send to me your Line or facebook ID! Thank you for reading.
文法間違ってますよ
文法の間違いを指摘するなら、添削してあげたら？君の立派な英語力でさ。
まあいいじゃないの、英語上達しに来てるんだから。文法もだけど、(友達いないとか英語話すの下手とか)ネガティブな要素をあまり書かない方がいいんじゃないかな。自分ならこう書くかな、というのを書いてみたのでだれか添削又は意見オナシャス！
Hi, I am a 19 year old guy from Korea!
I am here with my working holiday visa to improve my English and have new experiences with great people from different part of the world!! I am looking for language exchange partners who wants to use English with me while drinking coffee or beers. I live near Finch station but I can go anywhere in TTC area. My English level is beginner to intermediate.
If you are interested, please send me your Line or facebook ID!
^^^^
これも間違っているよ。
惜しいけどね。
カナダ人、具体的な指摘をオナシャス！
different part of the world
language exchange partners who wants
例えばここが間違ってるよ
おっしゃる通りですね。ご指摘アリャス！
I am here with my working holiday visa to
........on my working holiday....
with great people from different part of the world!!
With amazing people from different parts of the world
I am looking for language exchange partners who wants to use English with me while drinking coffee or beers.
.......who want to......or beer....
I live near Finch station but I can go anywhere in TTC area.
.....the TTC area
My English level is beginner to intermediate.
....My English level is somewhere between beginner to intermediate.
以外と治すのがめんどくさいな。笑
↑治す→直す
Thank you guys!!!